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==Plot Summaries== | ==Plot Summaries== | ||
Have to say thank you for going over my over long plot summaries that I posted--[[User:BigDocFan|BigDocFan]] ([[User talk:BigDocFan|talk]]) 14:24, 19 February 2018 (UTC) | Have to say thank you for going over my over long plot summaries that I posted--[[User:BigDocFan|BigDocFan]] ([[User talk:BigDocFan|talk]]) 14:24, 19 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
:No worries! Just a bit of advice on plot summaries, try to make them shorter by not adding in what every person is doing/thinking. For example, it might not be necessary to write that RotomDex was surprised because of some event, or that Sophocles mentions something about a device he made. Also, I think cutting sentences into shorter ones helps make the plot more readable, as well trying to diversify the sentence structure to make a plot more interesting to read. --[[User:Wowy|<span style="color:#AAAAFF">'''Wowy'''</span>]][[User talk:Wowy|<sub style="color:#B69E00;">'''(토크)'''</sub>]] 10:00, 20 February 2018 (UTC) |