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He is the composer of much the opening theme and ending theme songs used in the Pokémon anime, '''and''' he is also currently the president of Creatures, Inc. | He is the composer of much the opening theme and ending theme songs used in the Pokémon anime, '''and''' he is also currently the president of Creatures, Inc. | ||
I'd do this myself but considering this article is in the MoS I thought it would be best to discuss this first. If I don't hear anything in a weekish I'll go ahead and make the change [[User:RotaRaichu|RotaRaichu]] ([[User talk:RotaRaichu|talk]]) 04:46, 10 June 2015 (UTC) | I'd do this myself but considering this article is in the MoS I thought it would be best to discuss this first. If I don't hear anything in a weekish I'll go ahead and make the change [[User:RotaRaichu|RotaRaichu]] ([[User talk:RotaRaichu|talk]]) 04:46, 10 June 2015 (UTC) | ||
:I think it would sound better if it were changed too. [[User:Slimey01|<span style="color:#111111">'''slimey'''</span>]][[User talk:Slimey01|<span style="color:#AAAAAA">'''01'''</span>]] 14:07, 10 June 2015 (UTC) | |||
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Second Sentence
IMO it would be easier to parse the article (and it would be grammatically correct) if the conjunction of second sentence of the first paragraph was changed from "but" to "and". Current first sentence: He is the composer of much the opening theme and ending theme songs used in the Pokémon anime, but he is also currently the president of Creatures, Inc. Proposed change: He is the composer of much the opening theme and ending theme songs used in the Pokémon anime, and he is also currently the president of Creatures, Inc. I'd do this myself but considering this article is in the MoS I thought it would be best to discuss this first. If I don't hear anything in a weekish I'll go ahead and make the change RotaRaichu (talk) 04:46, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
