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Nobody's written anything here? Well, I'll just try to make its "in the anime" description hopefully a just a little (just a little) "better"...... I'm not sure if that's the word...... It's just that I've seen the episode O'er The Rampardos We Watched quite a couple of times...... and I think it could use a little(just a little)................ uhm...... "work"......--[[User:Dragonbeastx|<font color="blue">DRAGON</font>]][[User talk:Dragonbeastx|<font color="yellow">BEAST</font>]][[User:Dragonbeastx/Secret Page|<font color="red"><sup>X</sup></font>]] 03:54, 31 December 2008 (UTC) | Nobody's written anything here? Well, I'll just try to make its "in the anime" description hopefully a just a little (just a little) "better"...... I'm not sure if that's the word...... It's just that I've seen the episode O'er The Rampardos We Watched quite a couple of times...... and I think it could use a little(just a little)................ uhm...... "work"......--[[User:Dragonbeastx|<font color="blue">DRAGON</font>]][[User talk:Dragonbeastx|<font color="yellow">BEAST</font>]][[User:Dragonbeastx/Secret Page|<font color="red"><sup>X</sup></font>]] 03:54, 31 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
Well....... it's not much what I edited..... maybe it didn't need as much "work" as I thought it needed......... well, it just seemed SO POWERFUL in the episode and maybe needed a little more to show that........ anyway, it didn't need that much as I thought.......(Wow, I really do use a lot of '''.........'''.)--[[User:Dragonbeastx|<font color="blue">DRAGON</font>]][[User talk:Dragonbeastx|<font color="yellow">BEAST</font>]][[User:Dragonbeastx/Secret Page|<font color="red"><sup>X</sup></font>]] 04:02, 31 December 2008 (UTC) | :Well....... it's not much what I edited..... maybe it didn't need as much "work" as I thought it needed......... well, it just seemed SO POWERFUL in the episode and maybe needed a little more to show that........ anyway, it didn't need that much as I thought.......(Wow, I really do use a lot of '''.........'''.)--[[User:Dragonbeastx|<font color="blue">DRAGON</font>]][[User talk:Dragonbeastx|<font color="yellow">BEAST</font>]][[User:Dragonbeastx/Secret Page|<font color="red"><sup>X</sup></font>]] 04:02, 31 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
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I think it should be changed from "The user starts to get covered by a bluish-white light glow and then charges into its opponent" to something like "The user ''becomes covered'' in a [...]". This just seems more grammatically correct to me. Any thoughts? [[User:Oshawhat?|Oshawhat?]] 11:22, 11 February 2011 (UTC) | |||
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Empty article?
Nobody's written anything here? Well, I'll just try to make its "in the anime" description hopefully a just a little (just a little) "better"...... I'm not sure if that's the word...... It's just that I've seen the episode O'er The Rampardos We Watched quite a couple of times...... and I think it could use a little(just a little)................ uhm...... "work"......--DRAGONBEASTX 03:54, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
- Well....... it's not much what I edited..... maybe it didn't need as much "work" as I thought it needed......... well, it just seemed SO POWERFUL in the episode and maybe needed a little more to show that........ anyway, it didn't need that much as I thought.......(Wow, I really do use a lot of ..........)--DRAGONBEASTX 04:02, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
Grammar
I think it should be changed from "The user starts to get covered by a bluish-white light glow and then charges into its opponent" to something like "The user becomes covered in a [...]". This just seems more grammatically correct to me. Any thoughts? Oshawhat? 11:22, 11 February 2011 (UTC)
