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Hello, I've noticed you've been adding to the biology sections on Pokemon pages. You're doing a good job, but there are a couple of things I wanted to address. First, try to avoid too many subjective adverbs and adjectives, as they make the article sound biased or opinion-based which is something we try to avoid. Second, while the more detailed sections are nice, some them are a bit too long. You don't need to be so specific and try not to repeat the same information several times. Third, don't put [[Ability|Abilities]] in the "Special abilities" section. That section is for talents and traits other than actual Abilities, which are listed in the infobox. Other than that, you're doing fine. Thanks! [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 05:43, 25 January 2013 (UTC) | Hello, I've noticed you've been adding to the biology sections on Pokemon pages. You're doing a good job, but there are a couple of things I wanted to address. First, try to avoid too many subjective adverbs and adjectives, as they make the article sound biased or opinion-based which is something we try to avoid. Second, while the more detailed sections are nice, some them are a bit too long. You don't need to be so specific and try not to repeat the same information several times. Third, don't put [[Ability|Abilities]] in the "Special abilities" section. That section is for talents and traits other than actual Abilities, which are listed in the infobox. Other than that, you're doing fine. Thanks! [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 05:43, 25 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
I wanted to thank you for your kindness, it's probably annoying doing so much reading and re-editing! I appreciate your kind tone. I'll try to make my contributions more objective in the future, and it's good to know that Abilities don't belong under Special Abilities. Thanks for the guidance, and I believe I will continue to edit Biologies to the best of my ability! Thanks! (Did I respond correctly? If not, how can I learn how to do that?) ([[User:FlynnFitzherbert|FlynnFitzherbert]] ([[User talk:FlynnFitzherbert|talk]]) 06:06, 25 January 2013 (UTC)) |
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Instead of editing a page several times in a row, try using the preview button to make sure your edit looks the way you want it to. It's right next to the Save Changes button... Please try it out, so as not to clog up the Recent Changes. Thanks! --Crystal Talian 23:01, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
Pokémon Biology
Hello, I've noticed you've been adding to the biology sections on Pokemon pages. You're doing a good job, but there are a couple of things I wanted to address. First, try to avoid too many subjective adverbs and adjectives, as they make the article sound biased or opinion-based which is something we try to avoid. Second, while the more detailed sections are nice, some them are a bit too long. You don't need to be so specific and try not to repeat the same information several times. Third, don't put Abilities in the "Special abilities" section. That section is for talents and traits other than actual Abilities, which are listed in the infobox. Other than that, you're doing fine. Thanks! Crystal Talian 05:43, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
I wanted to thank you for your kindness, it's probably annoying doing so much reading and re-editing! I appreciate your kind tone. I'll try to make my contributions more objective in the future, and it's good to know that Abilities don't belong under Special Abilities. Thanks for the guidance, and I believe I will continue to edit Biologies to the best of my ability! Thanks! (Did I respond correctly? If not, how can I learn how to do that?) (FlynnFitzherbert (talk) 06:06, 25 January 2013 (UTC))