User contributions for Pumpkinking0192

15 February 2013

• 05:0905:09, 15 February 2013 diff hist −98‎ m Fake Pokémon ‎ →‎In the anime: None of these are Fakemon, so they're irrelevant to the page's topic.
• 04:4304:43, 15 February 2013 diff hist +2‎ m Water 3 (Egg Group) ‎ →‎Characteristics: Sorry about that; I'm super tired. Days of sleep loss and all.
• 02:5902:59, 15 February 2013 diff hist −32‎ Water 3 (Egg Group) ‎ →‎Characteristics: I think this is more concise.
• 01:1201:12, 15 February 2013 diff hist −28‎ m Illumise (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Pokédex entries: Neither of these is referring to the game phenomena; they just coincidentally use the same terms.

14 February 2013

• 20:2520:25, 14 February 2013 diff hist −258‎ m Pokémon Essential Handbook ‎ This isn't an error, it's just a different way of transcribing the same pronunciation. Say both out loud to yourself.
• 20:2320:23, 14 February 2013 diff hist −41‎ m Arceus (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: That's not a fourth pronunciation, it's just a different way of transcribing the same one.

13 February 2013

• 01:1801:18, 13 February 2013 diff hist +398‎ Talk:Mewtwo (Pokémon) ‎ →‎16th Movie

12 February 2013

• 17:5817:58, 12 February 2013 diff hist +19‎ m Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ →‎Trivia: "Having these games been the last ones"????? What????? I understand what you're trying to say, but I can't fathom how you're trying to go about it, so I'm just rewriting this altogether.

11 February 2013

• 22:3922:39, 11 February 2013 diff hist −21‎ Conkeldurr (Pokémon) ‎ Undo revision 1803805 by Nickvang (talk) This seems a little out there to me. If they were meant to have back injuries, they wouldn't be able to attack with so much power, would they?
• 21:3621:36, 11 February 2013 diff hist −12‎ m BW112 ‎ →‎Trivia
• 21:3421:34, 11 February 2013 diff hist −63‎ m Unown (Pokémon) ‎ You missed this in your undoings ;)
• 21:3221:32, 11 February 2013 diff hist +1‎ m EP038 ‎ →‎Lasting effects: "Cameo" implies "small" by definition, so there's no need to be redundant.

10 February 2013

• 18:2418:24, 10 February 2013 diff hist −78‎ Fire (type) ‎ Undo revision 1845874 by Mr. Guye (talk) I don't really see the relevance of this note to the trivium to which it was appended... Evolutionary forms and rarity aren't necessarily connected.

9 February 2013

• 18:4018:40, 9 February 2013 diff hist −4‎ m Mantine (Pokémon) ‎ Undo revision 1845259 by NubScrub (talk) I don't know the exact cutoff points, but based on a quick glance at other articles, 10% appearance rate seems to fall under "Rare" on BP.
• 01:1501:15, 9 February 2013 diff hist −63‎ m Pikachu (Pokémon) ‎ Undo revision 1844595 by Chickenpop16 (talk) Citation please? I see nothing in its Pokedex entries, artwork, etc suggesting its teeth are particularly sharp enough to take note of.

8 February 2013

• 21:4621:46, 8 February 2013 diff hist +6‎ m One Island (town) ‎ Undo revision 1842876 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) The determiner "the" is definitely necessary in preceding "Ruby and Sapphire", as it refers to the items, not the games.
• 21:4421:44, 8 February 2013 diff hist −12‎ m Salac Berry ‎ Undo revision 1842884 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) This is the diction we use on every other Berry page. Reverting for consistency's sake, but I have no grammatical qualms with it.
• 21:4221:42, 8 February 2013 diff hist +24‎ m Oddity Cave ‎ Undo revision 1844286 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) We include the number of floors on all the other Mystery Dungeon pages. Why remove it?
• 21:4121:41, 8 February 2013 diff hist −27‎ m Lake Psyduck ‎ I haven't seen the episode, so correct me if I presumed facts incorrectly. This seemed the best way to rewrite the info about the other lake without it sounding stilted.
• 21:3821:38, 8 February 2013 diff hist −1‎ m Battle Frontier (Generation IV) ‎ Undo revision 1844380 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) I don't know if it's an official policy, but virtually no captions on BP end in a full stop.
• 21:3621:36, 8 February 2013 diff hist −138‎ Talk:Ash's Infernape ‎ Undo revision 1844301 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) We aren't supposed to reply to super old discussions like this, and it wasn't on the page at the time that the OP first posted, anyway.
• 21:3321:33, 8 February 2013 diff hist −86‎ Round (move) ‎ Undo revision 1844367 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) We only include an out-of-battle section for moves that actually have an effect out of battle, such as HMs (and ex-HMs like Flash).

7 February 2013

• 19:1519:15, 7 February 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Rock Slide (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: Whoops. Sorry.
• 19:1419:14, 7 February 2013 diff hist +36‎ m Rock Slide (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: I think I got the preferred BP style right on "X type". Correct me if I'm wrong, please.

6 February 2013

• 21:0121:01, 6 February 2013 diff hist +8‎ m Unova ‎ →‎Etymology: It's important to clarify this, considering the entire last paragraph is spent on "Isshu", not "Unova".
• 20:4920:49, 6 February 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Giga Drain (move) ‎ →‎Effect: "However" cannot bridge two clauses. You have to use a period or semicolon.
• 15:2315:23, 6 February 2013 diff hist −1‎ m Seagallop ‎ →‎Access to the Sevii Islands: "Retrieved to [recipient]" isn't a valid English construction.

5 February 2013

• 22:0522:05, 5 February 2013 diff hist −98‎ m Brock (anime) ‎ →‎Appearance: (1) Game Brock isn't in this article's scope, and (2) I count 5 outfits for game Brock: 2 (RB, Gen 2) that aren't these colors, 2 (Gens 3, 4/5) that are, and 1 (Y) that's arguable either way due to primitive spriting. That isn't "most".

3 February 2013

• 19:2819:28, 3 February 2013 diff hist −150‎ Deoxys (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Physiology: This was just trudging and repetitive, so it needed to be a separate paragraph rather than an interchangeable line in every single forme description.

1 February 2013

• 06:0906:09, 1 February 2013 diff hist −3‎ m Snorunt (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: If you're unsure, try inverting your sentence to make sure it's right. "Sinnoh is based on in Hokkaido" was the meaning of the previous iteration of that sentence. B+ for the effort of using the "preposition which" construction, though.

30 January 2013

• 21:0721:07, 30 January 2013 diff hist −7‎ Icy Wind (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: You don't need both "since" and "as of"; they indicate the same idea. "Line" in this sentence was odd and seemed to only exist to stretch the sentence to give enough words to use as links. So I just double-linked "evolutions". Hope that's OK.

27 January 2013

• 19:5719:57, 27 January 2013 diff hist +109‎ Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ Undo revision 1837718 by Nintenfan82 (talk) Why remove this? As far as I know, it's both accurate and unique enough to be worth noting.
• 19:5519:55, 27 January 2013 diff hist +7‎ m Shell Smash (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: Previous phrasing wasn't completely accurate, as Gorebyss can't technically "learn" Shell Smash; it has to have it before evolving.
• 19:4419:44, 27 January 2013 diff hist −100‎ m May's Beautifly ‎ Undo revision 1837549 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) Gender differences were introduced in Gen 4, but this Beautifly was introduced well before then, so we can't assume its gender.

25 January 2013

• 20:5120:51, 25 January 2013 diff hist +61‎ Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ Per request on the talk page.
• 00:0100:01, 25 January 2013 diff hist −11‎ m Arceus (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Fan pronunciations are unnotable, and "popular usage" is unverified. If we're mentioning the trailer, we should probably also make mention of the final cut of the movie (to clear up ambiguity).

22 January 2013

• 18:3318:33, 22 January 2013 diff hist −95‎ Regigigas (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: I don't think this is strictly necessary. After all, we don't specify the same on the opposite side of the scale ("Wurmple is the only Pokemon with a BST of 195 that was not introduced in Gen 1").

21 January 2013

• 21:5921:59, 21 January 2013 diff hist 0‎ m Icirrus City ‎ →‎Black 2 and White 2
• 19:5519:55, 21 January 2013 diff hist +619‎ User talk:Kenji-girl/Archive 24 ‎ →‎Mediation request: new section
• 19:5019:50, 21 January 2013 diff hist +1,806‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎The Official Pokémon Handbook: Responding to this at all is probably a bad idea. We're both gonna think the worst of each other no matter what we say, aren't we?
• 00:4800:48, 21 January 2013 diff hist +849‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎The Official Pokémon Handbook

20 January 2013

• 19:1919:19, 20 January 2013 diff hist +6‎ m The Official Pokémon Handbook ‎ →‎Entries: The TM doesn't learn the move, so the phrasing "learned by TM" is incorrect. ("Learn" and "teach" are not synonyms, despite what street slang tells you.)
• 04:3104:31, 20 January 2013 diff hist −54‎ m Keira ‎ →‎In the games: Conciseness is preferable.
• 03:1503:15, 20 January 2013 diff hist −101‎ Idol (Trainer class) ‎No edit summary
• 03:0903:09, 20 January 2013 diff hist −18‎ Pop Roxie ‎ Active verbs are almost always better than passive verbs. (I also prefer active verbs over -ing participles, but I don't know if any writing guides back that up.)
• 03:0203:02, 20 January 2013 diff hist +16‎ m Lanette ‎ →‎In the games: There's no such thing as the term "graphical-friendly". "Engross" is almost the same as "fascinate", so a person "is engrossed in" something; they don't "engross" it. I suggest not using words you're unsure of in the future.
• 02:4802:48, 20 January 2013 diff hist −194‎ Absol (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Origin: This section was just a complete mess. I also think the "absolve" and "Absalom" bits in the name origin section sound a bit tenuous, and might be worth doing away with.

18 January 2013

• 19:3519:35, 18 January 2013 diff hist −3‎ m Shiny Collection (TCG) ‎ It's "comprises" or "is composed of"; never "comprises of" and only informally "is comprised of". See http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/comprise#Usage_notes
• 02:3902:39, 18 January 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Flute ‎ Commas NEVER separate two disparate clauses. Use a period, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as "and".
• 02:3302:33, 18 January 2013 diff hist +173‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Scyther and Porygon2