User contributions for Pumpkinking0192

6 February 2013

• 21:0121:01, 6 February 2013 diff hist +8‎ m Unova ‎ →‎Etymology: It's important to clarify this, considering the entire last paragraph is spent on "Isshu", not "Unova".
• 20:4920:49, 6 February 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Giga Drain (move) ‎ →‎Effect: "However" cannot bridge two clauses. You have to use a period or semicolon.
• 15:2315:23, 6 February 2013 diff hist −1‎ m Seagallop ‎ →‎Access to the Sevii Islands: "Retrieved to [recipient]" isn't a valid English construction.

5 February 2013

• 22:0522:05, 5 February 2013 diff hist −98‎ m Brock (anime) ‎ →‎Appearance: (1) Game Brock isn't in this article's scope, and (2) I count 5 outfits for game Brock: 2 (RB, Gen 2) that aren't these colors, 2 (Gens 3, 4/5) that are, and 1 (Y) that's arguable either way due to primitive spriting. That isn't "most".

3 February 2013

• 19:2819:28, 3 February 2013 diff hist −150‎ Deoxys (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Physiology: This was just trudging and repetitive, so it needed to be a separate paragraph rather than an interchangeable line in every single forme description.

1 February 2013

• 06:0906:09, 1 February 2013 diff hist −3‎ m Snorunt (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: If you're unsure, try inverting your sentence to make sure it's right. "Sinnoh is based on in Hokkaido" was the meaning of the previous iteration of that sentence. B+ for the effort of using the "preposition which" construction, though.

30 January 2013

• 21:0721:07, 30 January 2013 diff hist −7‎ Icy Wind (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: You don't need both "since" and "as of"; they indicate the same idea. "Line" in this sentence was odd and seemed to only exist to stretch the sentence to give enough words to use as links. So I just double-linked "evolutions". Hope that's OK.

27 January 2013

• 19:5719:57, 27 January 2013 diff hist +109‎ Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ Undo revision 1837718 by Nintenfan82 (talk) Why remove this? As far as I know, it's both accurate and unique enough to be worth noting.
• 19:5519:55, 27 January 2013 diff hist +7‎ m Shell Smash (move) ‎ →‎Trivia: Previous phrasing wasn't completely accurate, as Gorebyss can't technically "learn" Shell Smash; it has to have it before evolving.
• 19:4419:44, 27 January 2013 diff hist −100‎ m May's Beautifly ‎ Undo revision 1837549 by Rainbow Shifter (talk) Gender differences were introduced in Gen 4, but this Beautifly was introduced well before then, so we can't assume its gender.

25 January 2013

• 20:5120:51, 25 January 2013 diff hist +61‎ Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ Per request on the talk page.
• 00:0100:01, 25 January 2013 diff hist −11‎ m Arceus (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Fan pronunciations are unnotable, and "popular usage" is unverified. If we're mentioning the trailer, we should probably also make mention of the final cut of the movie (to clear up ambiguity).

22 January 2013

• 18:3318:33, 22 January 2013 diff hist −95‎ Regigigas (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: I don't think this is strictly necessary. After all, we don't specify the same on the opposite side of the scale ("Wurmple is the only Pokemon with a BST of 195 that was not introduced in Gen 1").

21 January 2013

• 21:5921:59, 21 January 2013 diff hist 0‎ m Icirrus City ‎ →‎Black 2 and White 2
• 19:5519:55, 21 January 2013 diff hist +619‎ User talk:Kenji-girl/Archive 24 ‎ →‎Mediation request: new section
• 19:5019:50, 21 January 2013 diff hist +1,806‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎The Official Pokémon Handbook: Responding to this at all is probably a bad idea. We're both gonna think the worst of each other no matter what we say, aren't we?
• 00:4800:48, 21 January 2013 diff hist +849‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎The Official Pokémon Handbook

20 January 2013

• 19:1919:19, 20 January 2013 diff hist +6‎ m The Official Pokémon Handbook ‎ →‎Entries: The TM doesn't learn the move, so the phrasing "learned by TM" is incorrect. ("Learn" and "teach" are not synonyms, despite what street slang tells you.)
• 04:3104:31, 20 January 2013 diff hist −54‎ m Keira ‎ →‎In the games: Conciseness is preferable.
• 03:1503:15, 20 January 2013 diff hist −101‎ Idol (Trainer class) ‎No edit summary
• 03:0903:09, 20 January 2013 diff hist −18‎ Pop Roxie ‎ Active verbs are almost always better than passive verbs. (I also prefer active verbs over -ing participles, but I don't know if any writing guides back that up.)
• 03:0203:02, 20 January 2013 diff hist +16‎ m Lanette ‎ →‎In the games: There's no such thing as the term "graphical-friendly". "Engross" is almost the same as "fascinate", so a person "is engrossed in" something; they don't "engross" it. I suggest not using words you're unsure of in the future.
• 02:4802:48, 20 January 2013 diff hist −194‎ Absol (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Origin: This section was just a complete mess. I also think the "absolve" and "Absalom" bits in the name origin section sound a bit tenuous, and might be worth doing away with.

18 January 2013

• 19:3519:35, 18 January 2013 diff hist −3‎ m Shiny Collection (TCG) ‎ It's "comprises" or "is composed of"; never "comprises of" and only informally "is comprised of". See http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/comprise#Usage_notes
• 02:3902:39, 18 January 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Flute ‎ Commas NEVER separate two disparate clauses. Use a period, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as "and".
• 02:3302:33, 18 January 2013 diff hist +173‎ User talk:Pumpkinking0192/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Scyther and Porygon2

17 January 2013

• 23:4423:44, 17 January 2013 diff hist −152‎ m Porygon-Z (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Scyther/Scizor at the very least. There might also be so many others that this isn't even notable enough for the trivia section, but I'll leave that for someone else to decide.
• 18:5018:50, 17 January 2013 diff hist −1‎ m List of Pokémon with unique type combinations ‎ →‎Trivia: It's better to use the "undo" feature so that you don't leave scattered minor errors like this.
• 16:5016:50, 17 January 2013 diff hist −420‎ Iris ‎ →‎Trivia: E is not a sequel to R or S, but a separate canon altogether, so if you're separating B's canon versus W's canon, you have to separate RSE, as well, making this untrue (Wallace cannot be battled in E's canon before becoming Champion).
• 16:4316:43, 17 January 2013 diff hist +61‎ Kanto Safari Zone ‎ →‎Trivia: It's not absolutely necessary, but I do think there should be an indication in the trivia point of what's in the video, since it has to be opened separately in Youtube instead of running while embedded in this page.

15 January 2013

• 18:0418:04, 15 January 2013 diff hist −117‎ m Togepi (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Its Gen II shiny sprites look nothing like the miscolored Gen IV one, and I don't see how the anime is relevant at all in this particular case.
• 17:5817:58, 15 January 2013 diff hist −2‎ m Togetic (Pokémon) ‎ Friendship doesn't evolve into Togekiss. Togetic does.
• 15:4915:49, 15 January 2013 diff hist −147‎ m Pokémon Black and White Versions 2 ‎ Undo revision 1831553 by Sailorscoutx (talk) Like ArcToraphim said, B1W1 had a second Master Ball available from having outsider Pokemon from 50 different OTs.
• 05:2105:21, 15 January 2013 diff hist −1‎ m Rock Slide (move) ‎ →‎Effect: We really need to standardize these headings. Some of them are, for example, "Generations II-V", some are "... and on", some are "... and onward".
• 01:4401:44, 15 January 2013 diff hist −164‎ m Wailord (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: The "existed since the golems were sealed away" thing is totally speculatory and fanony and doesn't belong on this wiki.

13 January 2013

• 19:2519:25, 13 January 2013 diff hist −195‎ Seaside Cave ‎ If you have to specify "but this is unlikely", it's probably not notable enough to mention. Also, although "first to do X" is frequently notable, "second to do X" (and third, and so on) is never notable.
• 14:3914:39, 13 January 2013 diff hist −196‎ m Pokémon Red and Green beta ‎ →‎Pokémon names: To me it just looks like that particular poster was limited to 7 characters for some reason (since Skulkraken, Sandstorm, Articuno, Bulbasaur, etc are all cut off at 7).

12 January 2013

• 23:1623:16, 12 January 2013 diff hist −6‎ m Porygon-Z (Pokémon) ‎ Undo revision 1825266 by Samueljoo (talk) While not totally incorrect, "first" implies the existence of others.
• 23:1423:14, 12 January 2013 diff hist +6‎ Legendary birds ‎ Undo revision 1826350 by Samueljoo (talk) I don't recall the movie mentioning a literal creator/creation connection. I might be wrong, though.
• 23:1223:12, 12 January 2013 diff hist −4‎ m Hun ‎ →‎Intro: Sorry to edit twice in a row; didn't notice this.
• 23:0923:09, 12 January 2013 diff hist +22‎ Hun ‎ Saying outright "this is why we're referring to him as male in this article" is a sign of amateurish writing. I kept it in <!-- -->, though, for the benefit of other editors who might change the article's pronouns in the absence of a definitive statement.
• 22:5822:58, 12 January 2013 diff hist −5‎ Ash's Butterfree ‎ Undo revision 1830487 by Samueljoo (talk)

11 January 2013

• 23:5323:53, 11 January 2013 diff hist +939‎ Talk:Probopass (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Kid's Toy
• 09:0709:07, 11 January 2013 diff hist −13‎ m Genesect (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Major appearances: Why is this phrased this way? "Make its appearance" sounds dumb without the modifier "debut".
• 06:1006:10, 11 January 2013 diff hist −5‎ m Talk:Froakie (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Design Origin: Please use colons (:) to indent your paragraphs; if you use spaces, it screws up the page's formatting.
• 06:0906:09, 11 January 2013 diff hist −66‎ m Lake guardians (anime) ‎ Undo revision 1826815 by Doggy567123 (talk) Anyone can see that from the "moves used" sections. We try to avoid trivia that's obvious from looking at the rest of the article.
• 05:5605:56, 11 January 2013 diff hist +2‎ m Poison (type) ‎ →‎Trivia: Pet peeve.
• 01:0001:00, 11 January 2013 diff hist −1‎ m Legendary giants ‎ →‎Pokémon Ruby, Sapphire, and Emerald: RS should go before E for obvious reasons.

10 January 2013

• 17:3817:38, 10 January 2013 diff hist −130‎ m Bulbapedia talk:Editor's Hub/Archive 1 ‎ Undo revision 1828926 by Xyrule (talk) Crystal, Ruby, Sapphire, Emerald, Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum aren't colors; they're gemstones.

9 January 2013

• 18:0918:09, 9 January 2013 diff hist −70‎ Water (type) ‎ Undo revision 1828328 by Macheon (talk) See my edit summary for the Grass (type) page.